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Post by prissy on Sept 12, 2005 12:10:20 GMT -5
A knife cuts, deep into my soul, of a pain, I can't let go.
A pain so deep, betrayal of vows spoken, your to blind to see, My heart is broken.
Blindly you cut, time after time, pain not done justice, by a simple rhyme.
How many times will my friends pick me up, till on this marriage, I finally give up?
Are you so blind? do you not see ? do you even care? what you have done to me?
It don't go away, with a simple I am sorry, are you so dense, you don't even worry.
How many more tears, am I suppose to cry? how many more times do I have to wish to die?
Wake up!!!! this may be your last chance, Though I may be here in body, I have forgotton the dance.
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Post by katyspankwish on Sept 12, 2005 20:52:58 GMT -5
(((((((((((((((((((((((((((HUGS)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Post by rebel on Sept 12, 2005 22:39:34 GMT -5
Deep....now that you know how you feel...let him know {{{{{{{{{{{{{{{HUG}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}
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Post by Littlebrat on Sept 14, 2005 7:18:25 GMT -5
(((((((((((hugs))))))))))))
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Post by prissy on Sept 14, 2005 14:13:49 GMT -5
someone please explain to me why this was moved here. It was written by me because I was in extreme pain and hurt very deeply. I needed the TLC. Obviously how I felt because I expressed myself with a poem did not matter. Thanks for those who do care.
prissy
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Post by rebel on Sept 14, 2005 21:09:57 GMT -5
It was moved to off topic to be in the library section....no animosity was meant.....sorry if you felt it was.
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Post by prissy on Oct 4, 2005 23:22:16 GMT -5
thank you sir, I'll keep that in mind.
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Post by prissy on Oct 5, 2005 11:15:10 GMT -5
it doesn't matter. Sir Mark. I have bigger fish to fry, trying to heal from six hours of surgery. Is there any chance we could get a poetry section?? Please.
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Post by rebel on Oct 5, 2005 12:23:43 GMT -5
I will see what can be done
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